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Anybody got some free time on their hands and some writing advice going spare?
So I got this idea from a limited knowledge of the events of "Seeing is Believing": Fraser asks Ray something he shouldn't that first time he hypnotizes him, finds out something more personal about Ray's past than that he was abducted by aliens at age ten, and then Fraser does it again - hypnotizes Ray. And then again. And again.
Then I actually watched the episode, and after a couple of days, I managed to beat the bunny and the canon into some sort of cooperation. Sort of.
Fast forward three weeks and a bunch of writer's block and whining and misery (much of it, I suspect, circumstantial) to the bit where I'm sitting here, stuck on the last scene, pretty well convinced that this story is Just Wrong, and doesn't want to be written, shouldn't be written, and probably ought to be consigned to a bottom drawer somewhere, if only for a cooling-off period. But then I thought, maybe it's retrievable. So. Anybody wanna give me a second opinion? Pretty please?
So I got this idea from a limited knowledge of the events of "Seeing is Believing": Fraser asks Ray something he shouldn't that first time he hypnotizes him, finds out something more personal about Ray's past than that he was abducted by aliens at age ten, and then Fraser does it again - hypnotizes Ray. And then again. And again.
Then I actually watched the episode, and after a couple of days, I managed to beat the bunny and the canon into some sort of cooperation. Sort of.
Fast forward three weeks and a bunch of writer's block and whining and misery (much of it, I suspect, circumstantial) to the bit where I'm sitting here, stuck on the last scene, pretty well convinced that this story is Just Wrong, and doesn't want to be written, shouldn't be written, and probably ought to be consigned to a bottom drawer somewhere, if only for a cooling-off period. But then I thought, maybe it's retrievable. So. Anybody wanna give me a second opinion? Pretty please?