WIP Amnesty, Day 3

Next stop in the ongoing WIP Amnesty tour of my sex-scene-writing learning curve. This story was going to be twelve sex scenes, tracing the development of a relationship between Fraser and RayK while skipping over any parts where they actually talked in words about what they were doing, and also skipping mostly over any other parts of what they were doing in the same timeframe.

It was going to be called Sampler, after the conceit of twelve sample-sized bottles of flavored lube, and because it was, well, it was me trying out writing sex scenes every which way until I got a handle on it, just like a little girl stitching a sampler to learn the craft. Sadly, this ended up like every actual sampler I ever attempted: about a tenth finished and stuffed into a drawer somewhere.

( The outline, in all its cryptically succinct glory. )

If this is sounding familiar, it may be because I actually did write up #5, Carmel Cream, as a birthdayfic for qe2 in 2005: Dulce Est (F/K, NC-17).

Also, and mostly irrelevantly, Getting It was the story I wrote to represent how this Fraser and Ray initially got together.

And here's the first scene and a half, which ended tragically coitus interruptus in July 2003 and never did get moving again.

Fraser/Kowalski, NC-17.

( Sampler )